By default I read the speech balloons as whispering, so I say it works perfectly! It’s amazing what a simple change in a word balloon can do for the reader. =)
Great job on Kavitha’s expression in the closeup, by the way. I see frustration and a bit of emotional fatigue.
By default I read the speech balloons as whispering, so I say it works perfectly! It’s amazing what a simple change in a word balloon can do for the reader. =)
Great job on Kavitha’s expression in the closeup, by the way. I see frustration and a bit of emotional fatigue.
Yes the balloons work!